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8d •
My 3rd EVER email
Good morning seniors, I'm trying to get a few opinions on my copy if you have time to spare https://docs.google.com/document/d/1OB5eV3kNDVQNFdJ36FvXHtKCfpm__hxPKqUGdRuZH7k/edit?usp=sharing
0 likes • 7d
@Bilal Safeer I appreciate the insight
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@Rimantas Vaitkus I appreciate the insight
9d •
Review mine and I'll review yours ASAP
Let's Grow By Pushing Each Other in a Friendly Copy Roast https://docs.google.com/document/d/1IgnxfJ35jLOw3vFraIxQs7I01id_V7abHmwSyRo0H0o/edit?usp=drivesdk
2 likes • 9d
@Jivi Tridip I used the "Question for you..." line because the person i wrote the email for likes to say that at beginning of his videos a lot But I really appreciate the feedback, you're the first person to ever provide me with feedback on my email, I'll make sure to take what you said into consideration and continue improving myself
1 like • 9d
@Jivi Tridip All the best too you too brother💪 also, thank you for helping me reach lvl2 now i can post
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Apr '25 •
Get Your Copy, Outreach, Or Questions Reviewed For FREE
Yooooooooo, wassup 4D family. Some of you already know, but I know a lot of you don't. If you want your copy/outreach reviewed, or your questions answers by a 6-figure copywriter on my team, then join the FREE live calls 2x per week. They're held in the Discord community stage every Wednesday and every Saturday, both at 9 AM EST. The review calls are always recorded and posted in the #resources channel of the Discord, but you should show up if you can so you can get your own stuff reviewed. Plus, I pop in there from time to time. Here's the link to the Wednesday call in Discord - https://discord.com/events/1053093919816175646/1364896078800879616 Here's the link to the Saturday call in Discord - https://discord.com/events/1053093919816175646/1363784979435225209 Like always, take notes. Your #1 fan, Professor 4D. P.S. These calls are held in the "Pickle Stage", see the screenshot below.
0 likes • 10d
@Balaji Balaji I feel like the SL could be better, Tyson has a guideline for SLs I suggest you check it out. Also there's spacing where there should'nt be breaking the conciseness and flow of the story Another thing is the story might be a bit too long, but that just might because of f'd attention span One last thing, you need a better hook to reel me into reading the story Other than that you did good in my opinion.
0 likes • 10d
@Navaj Official It's too clumped together, you need to space it every sentence or 2, otherwise it just looks too long to consume The SL is to generic, it's something a lot of people have heard countless of times Tyson has a guideline on SLs I suggest you check it out
Mar 23 •
Drop Your Copy
https://docs.google.com/document/d/13zPbRCnRVk5n5TZKW_ho6ueqcmwKgIjv682JC-j3Tvc/edit?usp=drivesdk
0 likes • 25d
please be as brutal as possible https://docs.google.com/document/d/104NSeWhUk4ECPUQlN34-waZdljlyuD7_WoJcl71ixvY/edit?usp=sharing
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