Listen, I've reached my minimum viable skill So I did outreaches on Instagram. My outreach is mostly giving out compliments first. Then pivot to business. 90% doens't even see my message. And 5% likes my compliment. Other 5 replies. Ive done 200 personalised outreach. Got 23 replies. I couldn't close even one. Any advice?
Let's Grow By Pushing Each Other in a Friendly Copy Roast https://docs.google.com/document/d/1IgnxfJ35jLOw3vFraIxQs7I01id_V7abHmwSyRo0H0o/edit?usp=drivesdk
Don't be shy, ladies and gentlemen, drop your copy to be cooked if you have confidence in what you wrote. Well, here's mine https://docs.google.com/document/d/18mxxxmkRQyU5vDQzV3Dhr-bQuQOUSzQvmWwb90wd1-s/edit?usp=sharing
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1NaVjqjziRQKnZYxistF1_khrvAPAD9ed-s1zlxFKG-I/edit?usp=sharing this is my first time posting an email for reviews. its up to you guys.
Can you review it. I think it's much better than my previous one https://docs.google.com/document/d/1o5ZU7QtXe74tw0N8WX-uNt18MQwFNl9j7DkHE4SYkcM/edit?usp=drivesdk