Everyone has been so amazing, I don't know if I'd have had the mental fortitude to continue working on my content if it wasn't for the incredible roasts! Here's my next version, with tons of improvements from everyone's feedback. This is the first one where I am starting to like it, but I'd love to hear what parts of the composition are still falling flat. I struggle being on camera, so I'm working on being more fluid and comfortable. But with how I've chosen to create these, the intro section with me on camera really needs to be polished or no one will get to the actual content. With that in mind, please tell me where you would have dropped off in the first minute! https://youtube.com/watch?v=ofNXJUyGopg