https://vt.tiktok.com/ZSx9J5FtR/ I did this exercise. Need an audit please

Hi family🌸 The time is finally here where I will start with fixing my teeth, it's been a difficult and long process, but the time has arrived. I will go in for the removal of all the remaining teeth (the top part) I will be getting dentures, I will be doing it in the chair so its going to be long and painful. I will not be able to do any training for at least a week or maybe more, but I will keep you all updated. I will be available from 30 May on the WhatsApp group and in here but please I will not be able to answer in voice note etc. So, there will be no training on the 1 & 2 June 2026, I will keep you posted when the next training will be available. I hope you all can have grace with me, and I will appreciate your patience's with me. There will be training tomorrow night for the Legacy Builders Content Support System and we are going to clear up what is wrong with TikTok. If you want to join the training, you can still pay the R 320 for the year and join the module & the training. Just ask for the link. See you tomorrow night🌸😁

I posted this today and No violations 😀https://vt.tiktok.com/ZS94rejkY/

Please check in The Content Accelerator for the talking points per hook if you need more guidance🌸 (Pillars: Connection + Authority + Relatable) HOOK 1 (Connection) ENGLISH HOOK: I didn’t grow up thinking “I’ll make money online one day”… I just got tired of struggling AFRIKAANS HOOK: Ek het nie grootgeword en gedink “ek gaan eendag geld aanlyn maak” nie… ek het net moeg geraak om te sukkel HOOK 2 (Authority) ENGLISH HOOK: The people making money online aren’t smarter… they just stopped doing this AFRIKAANS HOOK: Die mense wat geld aanlyn maak is nie slimmer nie… hulle het net opgehou om dit te doen HOOK 3 (Relatable) ENGLISH HOOK: If your plan is “I’ll figure it out later”… that might be the reason nothing is changing AFRIKAANS HOOK: As jou plan is “ek sal dit later uitfigure”… kan dit die rede wees hoekom niks verander nie

Your hook decides if someone listens to you… or scrolls past you. And here’s where most beginners go wrong: They try to sound “smart” instead of sounding clear. ❌ “Learn high-income digital strategies” ✅ “If you want to make money online but feel lost, read this” See the difference? Clarity > cleverness. Here are 5 hooks you can use: “If you want to start making money online but don’t know where to start…” “I was completely lost online until I figured this out…” “Nobody explains this about making money online…” “If you feel stuck trying to figure this out, this is for you…” “This is why most beginners struggle to make money online…” Action: Drop your niche or idea below I’ll rewrite a hook for you. Hooks are not magic. They’re just clear communication. — Your Content Coach