@Aj Rose Dear Aj Rose, Sorry, I didn't see the notification. Thank you so much for taking the time to give me such detailed and thoughtful feedback.💕 You were spot on with your first assumption: the story does take place over a single night. (It is actually a 1-hour short read with an 'instalove' trope, which is why everything moves so fast.) That was the reason for the rush, but your feedback made me realize that I need to be much clearer about the timeline in the blurb. I also loved your advice about the 'ticking clock' and removing the bingo reference. I’ll definitely work on punching up the sense of danger and their chemistry based on your suggestions. Thank you again for your kindness and for helping me make this blurb so much stronger. It means a lot! 🙏😊

@Aj Rose haha, thank you so much! 😃 💕 And thanks for the extra tips! To be honest, I wasn't even aware that 'commuter reads' were such a huge trend right now, so I really appreciate you pointing that out. It’s a great perspective! You made my day! 🥰