Hey, everyone. The guy who co-wrote ‘Shrek 2’ who I booked for January 7 is having a big seminar next week. It originally cost $795. Then he dropped it to $395 (probably worth it at that price, but I told him we were all poor in our group ;) Then he told me he really wants us there, and to ask you guys how much you can afford as a group rate. He said he really wants us there so that Jan 7’s meeting can be a lot more one on one—with him helping you guys more directly. I think if all main five of us agree to $35 a person, I think he will say yes to our group rate! (The others who aren’t as active are welcome to be a part of it). Who’s in? I also know it’s the holidays, and perhaps that’s the tough part. If it’s still tough for us I’ll let him know that my booking him for Jan 7 will have to be the only one we do. But please let me know! Nate

Hey all here is an updated link to the treatment doc for my "Exile" story. Please feel free to leave comments/questions. https://docs.google.com/document/d/1hL0XrBU4D2N0dWwlr0z0_3kRv94Er1V_n2Lp5gDVPMQ/edit?usp=sharing

Hey all, I've got a scene that's part of act one and the intent is to start to give Eve a sense of impending doom that something is coming for her and something is about to happen. (The Originator character I mentioned in class). What I'd like feedback on: - Does it make enough sense while still leaving some intrigue? - Is it clear on the three different characters? (Originator, Enforcer, and Observer) - Is it too short? - Other edits/grammar errors? Things to cut down? Other context: - Cleo is Eve's cat. - Asper is Eve's best friend

Let me know so I can get an idea of who will attend the Q&A!