Hi @Max Orlewicz I love the mission you are on with this and think you have great potential for an amazing Skool community. VSL: I agree with @Paulo Costa, The Roaster that this would work better as the first thing that people see. I really like the professional setting, however it felt like I was being read at instead of talked too, and the editing felt choppy. I would have liked to have seen some B-Roll with voice over to add some variety and keep it interesting and to bring it back to the context (lighthouse, teenage boys, etc). Also sounded AI scripted in places. Images: I like the main image and the testimonials. They didnt shout out 'on-brand' so have a think about your colours, fonts, logo/icons. The Lighthouse Method image didnt add any value for me and the format looked basic for someone I would be taking advice from to help my son. Copy: Reads well, just be careful to humanise any AI'isms 😉 Overall I think with a few tweaks this will be amazing and get you good results.

Great start @Brian Diep To make even better... 1. Make it your own. Remove the AI language (not this but that etc) That turns me off straight away. 2. Use the word milliseconds at the start. At first glance I read it as mins LOL. 3. Make the CTA stand out more, its a bit boring at the moment so doesn't make me want to do anything with it.

@Brian Diep much stronger, well done 👏

Hi @Youssef Abjayou Well done on this project. What stands out to me is there is little previewsof completed sites, and nothing to set it apart from all the other AI Website generators that are out there these days. Hope that helps.

@Donald Schaeffer Church Security Academy: The about page lists a lot of resources, but doesn't sell the transformation (safer more secure churches?). I would use more real life images from Churches you have helped and get testimonials if you can. I would also have liked to see reference to scripture in there. Who is your target audience? Clergy, pastors, security volunteers??? Faith & Freedom Builders: Great to see this is growing for you already. Similar to above. I couldn't tell if you were talking to me or what difference it would make to my life or my relationship with God (the change/transformation). The flow felt a bit out of sync too, you introduced yourself further down, I would open with that so I know who you are abd why I should listen. Keep going!

@Ruben Plasmeijer is the man!