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@godfrey
@Godfrey Virgile hey, would you email me or post your sides? We read today up here. I’d like to give it a proper read.
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Coming in cold on your project but here are my thoughts! What’s compelling about these worlds—Game of Thrones, Lord of the Rings—is the weight that every decision carries. Nothing comes easily. Everything costs. We feel the leaders and those burdened with and at the crux of decision making genuinely deliberating, understanding the effects their choices will have, and as a pitch, let us know Garin’s moral nature. Pitch: Give him someone in his advisory who is even more violent, cruel to show us Garin’s more temperate side. The dragon right now reads as mythical but generic, but I think you may be tasked with making the dragon of dragons. We all have GOT’s dragons burned into our brains. Show us this is the dragon to end all dragons. THEE DRAGOON that would eat for lunch all of GOT’s dragons. Make your dragon standout. In the first moment with the lowly peasant, think about how to give us a little backstory that highlights the troubles of the times. Most importantly, show that this is a hard decision for Garin to make—whatever that decision is within your story’s context. Does the peasant deserve such a horrific fate? If so, why. Garen reads as conflicted about the position he’s thrust into, which I like. He doesn’t want the pomp and circumstance. That works.​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​ I like a reluctant leader who doesn’t want the bullshit. Is Garin evil? Is he our hero? I wasn’t able to tell from the script. Right now he seems a bit evil and I don’t like him. Is there something special he does to gain control and submission of such a mighty beast? Hope that helps.
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That’s awesome, mate. Congrats. Really concepts. Looking forward to seeing it.
I'm speaking at a screenwriting conference this weekend. If you want tix, hmm below.
I'm one of the keynote speakers at Allegory Live. I'm going to be taking the Wound, The Lie and The Small life that I teach in workshops here. If you'd like to attend, one of our members who put this together has made a couple of tickets available. HMU here or DM me if you'd like to come. First come first serve. Thx. D
I'm speaking at a screenwriting conference this weekend. If you want tix, hmm below.
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Let us know time frame etc
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Thank you Chad!
🚨 ScriptReader Beta is live. First 50 in. Go.
Apple just approved it. This is the moment. Here's what ScriptReader does: it performs your screenplay aloud to you. Your characters. Your dialogue. Your scenes. With distinct voices for every role. You stop reading your script and start hearing it — which means you catch what your eye skips right over. I built this for you. For us. And right now, the beta is open. First 50 people get to try it free. That's it. No waitlist after that. Here's all you do: Step 1 — Download TestFlight. It's Apple's free beta testing app (iOS only — Android coming later.). Takes 30 seconds. → https://apps.apple.com/us/app/testflight/id899247664 Step 2 — Once TestFlight is on your phone, tap this link to join the beta: → https://testflight.apple.com/join/BVXKtFRD You get 30 minutes free. Use every second. Then come back and tell me everything — good, bad, whatever you actually think. That's the deal if you're one of the 50 who downloads. That feedback shapes what this becomes. Also, these 3 questions are hugely important: 1. Did it work? Could you get your script in and hear it play back without hitting a wall? Yes or no — and if no, where did it break? 2. What surprised you? Good or bad. What did you learn about your script? 3. Would you pay for this? Based on what this cost me, I cannot give this away for free. So if yes, what's a fair monthly price? The link is live. The clock is running. Don't download unless you're committed to giving feedback. If you are, comment: 🔥 below. And let's get to work! Go. 🎬 Edit: there are def some spacing issues with how it differentiates between characters and action. They sometimes run together. This is something I’m addressing in the next build. This build is more about… does it work at all. And don’t forget to try the Forge Analysis and see how that reads.
🚨 ScriptReader Beta is live. First 50 in. Go.
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@Jason Smith the gods will prevail. Maybe.
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redeem code issue cleared: CLICK ON THE SECOND LINK STEM POSTED.
Sprint 2 aftermath.
I think today was a pretty successful sprint. I was meant to be there for an hour today and we stayed for almost three. That’s why I love these calls. Productive. And we chat! And even better we always learn new things. Thanks for everyone dropping in today. Excited for the next one!!
Sprint 2 aftermath.
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@Chad Desrochers I was there! :)
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@Pia Crawford sorry I missed it Pia!
Your boy just became an Apple Developer. Sign up now or miss out!
The Beta version of the app I built for your guys is in the App Store waiting for approval Now it's time for you to do your part. And do it quickly. I had to limit to 50 people to keep expenses from skyrocketing. ScriptReader — yes, the one that performs your screenplay back to you with distinct AI voices for every character — is almost in your hands. I made the announcement the other day. But I couldn't stop at that. You know I'm extra. So there's more. Much more. And you'll see it the moment you open it. Here's you need to do right now: Download TestFlight. It's Apple's official beta testing app. Free. Takes 30 seconds. Tap this link and download it: https://apps.apple.com/us/app/testflight/id899247664 That's it. That's your only job until I drop the link once the app is approved. When Apple approves the build, I'm sending one announcement with the link. First 50 people to tap it get in. After that, it's closed. No waitlist. No "can you add me?" — the app just stops accepting testers at 50. So if you want a seat, get TestFlight on your phone right now and watch this space. It's coming. Any minute. Drop something exciting below once you've downloaded TestFlight so we know who's in!
Your boy just became an Apple Developer. Sign up now or miss out!
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Downloaded. Awaiting redeem code. Looking forward, stem.
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