Really liked the song! (Luckily, my French comprehension is pretty good!) There’s a clear narrative here, and, visually, I liked the look of the video. I watched the video on my phone, which has a smaller screen, so I didn’t notice much inconsistency in the character. You clearly had a story mapped out in advance, and that definitely helped with the cohesion in your video. I would say one thing. Visually, the conflict for the main character isn’t as clear as it could be, but since I understood the lyrics, I could see what you’re going for. Sometimes the visuals were too literal to the lyrics. There are a couple of great music videos that you can check out that, imo, are wonderful examples of telling a narrative story inside a music video (without being too literal): 1. Zombie (by Yungblud) 2. All I Want is You (by U2) Both of these videos feature protagonists that the viewer can identify with and experience the emotions the characters are experiencing, and thus are incredibly memorable with a strong emotional impact. To be clear, I enjoyed both your song and your video, but narratively, I feel you can push the envelope more. The central conflict for the protagonist needs to be clearer to better involve the viewer (emotionally) in the hero’s journey. I guess, for me, it wasn’t clear what was holding the protagonist back, and so I felt some of his journey didn’t have the emotional impact it could’ve had. But keep going! The more you make and experiment, the better and better you’ll get. And thank you for sharing your work.