Unless you use it like this... yesterday I came back to the community after like... Maybe 3-4 months of disappearing off the face of the earth. I was scrolling down, minding my business, and then… Big bold letters. "REVIEW TIME!" And then my inner voice went, "Let's see how these guys are doing." So I opened it. And right there was an email where some guy was saying “I m charging $200 for this email, shall i?” So I opened the $200 worth email, started reading... And stopped dead in the middle. Because it was entirely written by ChatGPT! No offense, BUT who in the history of EARTH is gonna pay $200 for AI SLOP?! Like who is this man's target client? Someone who's never heard of the internet? Someone from 1800s? And the scary part? It wasn't just him. There were MANY. Same Copy-> Paste the Prompt. Submit for review. Then ask why they haven't closed a client yet. Bruh… I almost spit out my drink (literally). Infact, I can't even laugh. Because in the beginning? I did the exact same thing. Tell GPT to write an email I didn't even understand myself. Throw it in the community. And when the "pros" reviewed it and said "This is AI garbage!" I'd get frustrated and... get angry at GPT (Like he ate my leftovers). Yeah I blamed that poor guy. And that's what the majority of beginners are doing right now. Here's the bitter truth you have to swallow: No one is gonna hire you for AI slop. Yeah, a few people managed to sneak through. But that window is closing fast, and those clients will figure it out eventually. Think about it… If the client can generate the same email in 30 seconds using the ChatGPT you're using... Why would he pay YOU? Why would any smart client spend hundreds of dollars for something that's free? He/she wouldn't. Nobody would. BUT… I came with a solution. And it came from going deep into the old legends. David Ogilvy (father of Advertising) Gary Halbert (The Prince of Print ) Schwartz (Godfather of Advertising )

So before u even read anything, I want to make this clear. It's not an email and it's not perfect, just some tips for my beginner buddies... Okay, so when i first joined this community i was totally lost. Like, genuinely had no idea what i was doing. So I did what every beginner does. opened ChatGPT, typed something like "write me a cold email for a copywriting client" and copy pasted whatever it gave me. It sounded like a LinkedIn bio was written. Then I threw it in the review channel and got the same 3 pieces of feedback every single time: "too long." "Add more curiosity." "make it shorter." So I made it shorter. Then shorter again, like an idiot. Then so short and so "curious" it genuinely made zero sense (And i know you are doing the same). Like I sent emails that were basically riddles. Nobody knew what i was offering or why they should even care. And somewhere in that process i started asking myself... is under 180 words actually backed by anything, or did someone just say it and everyone started repeating it? Because I had been reading Breakthrough Advertising by Eugene Schwartz. And if you don't know who that is, he wrote copy for brands like Rolls Royce. He was one of the greatest direct response copywriters who ever lived. And most people who claim to be seniors and rate others' emails don't even know him. Anyways, Schwartz says longer copy almost always beats short copy. not because long is better. But because the copy needs to be as long as the job requires. If your reader is cold and doesn't know you, you cannot close them in 180 words. You haven't built enough. You haven't earned enough trust for them to take action. So forget the 180 word rule. seriously. Emails aren't just sales tools. They're connection tools. and connection takes more than a tweet. But here's the thing that changed everything for me even more than that. I realized my copy wasn't even the real problem. My market was. Because it doesn't matter how good your email is if you're sending it to the wrong person.

hey fellow buddies, Just like last time i m back with some new value and i think beginners really need this. feels like a cheat code to me btw. Anyways, so today i was just scrolling through the community (which i usually don't) and i saw someone asking for help saying their CTAs are not converting and they needed help. and honestly, as i expected, the comments were the usual stuff: "add urgency" "tell them what happens if they don't buy" "be more specific" like look i'm not saying those are wrong. For SOME people, that works. But the guy asking already probably saw the same advice on three different YouTube videos before posting here. So today i'm going to give you something different. Something that actually works at a level most people here haven't touched yet. i call it Apples to Oranges.(and it's the origional name btw) and before you say you've heard this name somewhere, yeah Alex Hormozi talks about it too. and before him, Claude Hopkins, one of the original godfathers of advertising, was doing the same thing back when he was writing copy that literally moved products from unknown to number one in their market. So it's not some YouTube guru stuff. A man who got paid the equivalent of millions a year just to write ads in the 1900s. So what is it. most people when they write a CTA or frame their offer, they compare their product to a similar product. which is basically APPLES to APPLES. "our supplements have XYZ and the other brands don't" "we're better than competitor A because of this" and the reader's brain goes... okay so which brand do i pick?. now i have to research and compare and think. you just created work for them! or even worse, people throw in fake urgency: "only 25 spots!" "window is closing!" "you'll never see this price again!" and the reader has seen that line 47 times this week and they just scroll past it. so here's what Apples to Oranges actually means. instead of comparing your product to a similar product, you compare it to something completely different.

i've been writing a lot of letter and i recognised myself that my CTA is not good enough and ive tried to make it better. but it couldnt be done

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