Thanks for the tag @Paulo Costa, The Roaster and happy to help from a mkt pov... So first thing I noticed is that you open on the defensive, nobody was asking yet, and you're already justifying yourself. That sets the wrong tone from the start, because when you lead with justification, people sense the thing can't stand on its own. The "Most digital nomads gain freedom⦠but slowly lose structure" line actually works, but then you land on "We solve this." and it just⦠deflates. That's the moment to show them how, not tell them you do. The checkmark list is where I'd push back the hardest. You're selling features, not an identity. Who is the guy who comes out the other side of this? Because I'm reading about Fireside Chats and Nomad guides and I still don't have a clear picture of who this is for and what changes for him. Also, Nomad Match with the trademark symbol, I get what you were going for, but it makes it feel bigger than it might actually be right now, and that creates skepticism instead of excitement. The $1,300 value for $29 thing, I know why you're doing it, but that kind of anchor tends to signal "we're not confident in the price itself." And "price increases every 10 members" on top of that reads as pressure, not desirability, and also is kind of 2016 mkt stack offer. The retreats are genuinely cool and they got completely buried. Prague, Sarawak, Asunción, that's a whole vibe and it's sitting at the bottom of a checklist like an afterthought. The community sounds real and solid. The page just isn't showing it yet, you're writing to convince someone instead of calling in the person who already belongs... Hope this helps @David Solar š«¶