Responding to the tag here… I feel it super generic, I read those things so many times, it doesn’t have any differentiation from other mindset coaches Why you? What is the difference?

Here I go... Two credible hosts, a clear niche, and an offer that genuinely serves people navigating spiritual growth... a solid foundation. Few things worth sitting with: The copy opens with "INSTANT access" which is more Amazon than ascension. The audience you're speaking to isn't in a hurry. They're looking for depth, not speed. Lead with what the transformation feels like, not the delivery mechanism. "Stop feeling confused, overwhelmed or alone" is doing a lot of work, but it's also very generic. Every spiritual community promises this. What makes the confusion here different? What's specific about the awakening symptoms you help people move through? That specificity is what separates you from every other spiritual space out there. The CTA at the end "STEP INTO YOUR AWAKENING!" is energetically right, but what does that actually mean for someone reading it for the first time? And it's sitting at the bottom of a long list, by the time someone gets there, they've already decided. Pull that energy up to the top and let the list support it, not the other way around. The visual identity feels dated and text-heavy. Hard to read on desktop, close to impossible on mobile, people scroll fast, first impressions do a lot of the selling before a single word is read. If you feel extra support would help, I have a full guide on how to attract soul-aligned spiritual clients inside Prosperity Pact. Hope this helps, and good luck!

@William Brown still so many text… for context I recommend max 8-12 Words and 80pt font size. You can say all of that inside, no need to scare people, feeling they’ll need to go back to school instead lf skool 🙂

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@Paulo Costa, The Roaster no need to rush 😊

"The roasts are really helpful, not offensive", you're roasting the roast before anyone even shows up. That's like a dentist saying "don't worry, it won't hurt" while holding the drill. "Fast and Easy: Just post a link" ... that's also what spam is. Describing the community with the same words as a Fiverr gig isn't the flex you think it is. "People will always engage" ALWAYS? Bold promise. "And a lot of times, they subscribe to it!" ... a lot of times. You're selling a premium community with "a lot of times, maybe, who knows, could happen." Real FOMO right there. "Fire gifs" is listed as the most important feature. After the pinned posts. After the intros. After the VIP classroom content. The most important thing... is the gifs? I know is the fun part and culture but that is an inside joke. "Don't believe me? Check it out before you join" ... this is actually your best line and it's buried at the end like an afterthought. That's the headline. The bones are solid. The community sounds genuinely fun and different. It just needs to walk in with a little more confidence. 🔥

Hi with love and resepct: The premise is strong and the testimonial at the top is a great hook. But the copy contradicts itself a little. You say "no scripts, no templates" and then describe the program with four bullets that feel exactly like a template. If your differentiator is teaching people to sell authentically in their own voice, the copy should feel that way too, and at times it doesn't. The "20+ years and 150+ trainings" lands awkwardly. It interrupts the emotional flow right when you were building connection. Credentials support, they shouldn't lead. The transformation of the reader should be the center. I lile this part: "sell the way you actually talk" is really good. That's the heart of the whole thing and it deserves more real estate. What I'd cut without hesitation: "a safe space where you can practice without feeling judged, awkward, or salesy." It's generic and deflates the energy right at the end, when you want to close with momentum. The 🌿 emoji repeated four times in a row creates visual noise, personality is good, but when the format competes with the message, the message loses. And there's no call to action.. we need to tell people what to do ☺️ On the design: The teal is working and gives it a professional, calm feel that fits the "not pushy" positioning. But the cover slide is doing too much at once. The testimonial, the mission statement, and the three feature boxes are all competing for attention. Pick one anchor and build around it. The arrow icons in the feature boxes feel like a placeholder. They don't add meaning, they just fill space. The typography hierarchy needs work. "MY MISSION" is bold but the actual mission content isn't there, it's just the three boxes. That disconnect is confusing at first glance. Overall the visual identity has a solid base. It just needs more breathing room and a clearer focal point. Hope this helps. And in my community I have two sections that could help you, and I promise is not the way everyone teach. You can join for free and take a look. 🥰