I am creating a personal YouTube video about the Storyline of Super Mario Galaxy. The Intro is COMPLETE and that is what I am requesting feedback on today, everything is fully handcrafted and created by me along with the narration and sound design, let me know how I did and what needs improving :) https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-4-lyhbMVy4
and how can I improve? Please let me know, I would love any and all criticism so I can constantly improve and be aware of my mistakes! https://youtube.com/shorts/y2QpfjuT6EQ?feature=share