How'd I do? · Motion Creators (FREE)

How'd I do?

I am creating a personal YouTube video about the Storyline of Super Mario Galaxy. The Intro is COMPLETE and that is what I am requesting feedback on today, everything is fully handcrafted and created by me along with the narration and sound design, let me know how I did and what needs improving :) https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-4-lyhbMVy4

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