I'd love to know if it's clear from my homepage what I offer my clients. Do you think I need more detail on the homepage? Also, do I do a good enough job of building trust? https://zenafreelancewriter.com/ Thanks in advance!
@Zena Ryder your homepage design feels too plain. No color design, no page design that attract and make one feel comfortable looking at it. There is also no wording design to guide people how to read your homepage. Example if you need to go from top to bottom or left to right
There are plenty of ways to get leads and clients, and most people do several of those. If that't the case for you, what piece of your flow is the most important for your business?
https://minooshinde.com/ I like to get the feedback if moms of preteens and teens would find the content compelling to try my community. I know I have not explicitly mentioned Preteens-Teens yet, apart from that I am just curious if the content will land for them.
@Minoo Shinde I went through it today and I can say the brand colors are actually really good. Love the fell of premium in the color and page design but the layout feels too generic though. Needs a little bit of shadow on the edges to show someone your going to the next description
- What is the paid offer? - Who is it for? - How much do you charge for it? No freebies allowed! - No community membership, go directly to the offer. - Post links if you'd like.