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Hi Everyone! Here's my first go with my ad. Obviously my hair and makeup isn't done, and I'll use a mic, but is this clear enough and showcases that I'm fun and upbeat? Captions will also be there no worries on that. What should I adjust? And here is my about page ad copy: For women with service businesses who want real freedom, not just more responsibility. Inside this free community, you’ll learn how to turn a hard‑won service business into a simple, scalable one using my Freedom Framework for women in service industries. You’ll plug into the systems, mindset, & support that let you work less, earn more, & enjoy the life you built this for. You’ll discover how to: ✅ Set clear core values so decisions & boundaries get easier overnight ✅ Build systems that free up time instead of filling it ✅ Create consistent, profitable revenue without adding more hours ✅ Lead with confidence, delegate well, & stop being the bottleneck ✅ Grow a business that serves your family, lifestyle, and long‑term goals I’m Rachel Sutton, a former overworked trades owner who grew a $1.4M company while working about 20 hours a week. Now I teach other women how to do the same without burnout, martyrdom, or hustle culture. Join free to learn the framework that gives you your life back. 💚

Finally got round to doing this… not sure if I’ve over edited but pretty happy with the flow. All feedback welcome!

That was fun to do! 1st draft didn't work but that made us do one outside and it turned out so much better! What do you all think? I will take critiques and change it up to add to the campaign. Much appreciated!!

Ad Setup finally DONE ✅ 🎉🎉🎉 Thank you @Arnold Ammann for your support! I really appreciate that you take this part over. 💁‍♀️ Ads are running, jehei! I am soooo curious, how it works! And last night I attended my first Premium-Monday-Call, was so nice to get to know you all, and thanks for answering my question Alex! next step now