I've got a complete first draft of "The Body Doesn't Retire: Picking a New Fight After 50," the follow-up to "Not Done Yet." Ten chapters, ten sports, powerlifting to Senior Games. This is Book Two, and nobody outside my own head has read it yet. I'm looking for a handful of people from this group to read it and give me honest feedback before it goes further. If that's you, comment below or drop me a message and I'll send you the file directly in chat. A few things you should know before you volunteer. This is a first draft, not a polished manuscript. You'll hit typos, rough transitions, and sentences that made sense to me at 5 a.m. and nowhere else. You'll also run into sections that read a little stiff or generic, especially around training protocols or sport-specific data. I used AI tools to help gather and organize some of that research, and in a few spots the placeholder text is still in there because I haven't rewritten it in my own voice yet. If a paragraph suddenly sounds like it came from a textbook instead of from me, that's why, and it's exactly the kind of thing I need flagged. It will actually be interesting to see if you flag the sections I actually used AI in. :-) One more thing, and I mean it: this stays inside the group. If you take a copy, please don't post it, forward it, or share it anywhere else, including other communities or social media. It's an unfinished manuscript and I'd like to keep it that way until it's done. What I'll be asking for once you've read it: where you got bored, where you got confused, whether a chapter on a sport you don't do still made you want to try it, and whether anything felt fake or preachy. A few notes per chapter is plenty. Two or three weeks to get through it works fine. Comment or message me if you're in. Kim already read the CrossFit chapter and told me I used the word "grind" too many times, so you'll be in good company.