I want to send this outreach message to a prospect, please review https://docs.google.com/document/d/1BFLXC_W7XxEVf-2qc9g9VTbBdM3B5IbNwfgAeBBxLBQ/edit?usp=drivesdk
I want to send over this message to a prospect for outreach. Is it okay? https://docs.google.com/document/d/1BFLXC_W7XxEVf-2qc9g9VTbBdM3B5IbNwfgAeBBxLBQ/edit?usp=drivesdk
@Winnie W. Don't send this, the prospect won't reply. Your faults: 1. Too too long 2. Not straight to the point 3. Looks like outreach What you should fix: 1. Make it casual 2. Trim to at most 60 words 3. Be straight forward
@Rease Marshall it's good. It's an opt page right? Is it for a client? Anyways the headline was benefit driven, specific and you lead with credibility. It will convert very well. Well done 💪 Like if you found this valueable
Hey guys... I want to send this outreach message to a prospect. Is it personalized enough?https://docs.google.com/document/d/1GTDZPRRYgiw_IOQT8bkU33A1gV3L4m83z5wpztE14F8/edit?usp=drivesdk