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Why Email Secretly landed in SPAM?
This Doc i made is a must-read if you're doing EMAIL COLD OUTREACH. https://docs.google.com/document/d/1p3BnXP2alSNcNn2axf8bML7FbzIAmoUuEzXHnueAWf4/edit?usp=sharing Send a comment below to exchange email with me & others
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@Ajay Kumar thank y too! I'll wait XD
1 like • 26d
@Ajay Kumar it landed in my inbox! Also, I sent u an reply too. Thank y !
Passive/Active - AND WHY IT'S MATTER TO COPYWRITER
Between #1 "You can read articles, watch hundreds of videos, but nothing will work." #2 "You read articles, watched hundreds of videos, but nothing worked." Which reads FASTER? --------------------------------------- For #1 - the word 'can' forces readers to imagine what will happen IF they do the actions. This requires logic. Reading this costs significant energy. For #2 - Readers look at the actions and see nothing that asks for their attention. They effortlessly skip to the next sentence. This costs 0 time & 0 energy. ------------Lesson----------- There's a place called "drop-off point" where most readers click off (email/blog/article). This is because at that point, the information stops flowing. Readers seize that chance to determine if the text is worth further investment of their time, then drop off if it doesn't.
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@Ahsan Ali Left a few feedback
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@Rajeev Alexander DONE!
This is Urgent Asf!
Is there anyone here willing to connect with me on IG and hop on a mock sales call as practice?
0 likes • Mar 19
Sure. DM me.
Are these subject lines strong enough to pull clicks?
Hey guys I’m writing for contractors stuck at $500K/year trying to scale higher. Which one would YOU open? 1. Why many contractors cant go past $500K a year. 2. How to make $500K/month as a contractor 3. Making $500K/year as a contractor? What about a month? Be honest what works or what doesn’t? And how would you improve it?
1 like • Mar 17
Since $500k revenue is a thorny milestone, the prospect will likely be skeptical, especially if it's an email. To bring the subject line value up and lessen ambiguity element, add the specific 'how'. eg. 3 Secrets to.... You can also insert an estimated timeframe to boost their morale: eg. in 3 months. All of these assume the sender is a well-known figure in the space. If they aren't or this is an outreach email, it won't work.
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