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My 1st Copy Translation
Headline:How to pay bills quickly, easily Body: If you still pay bills with cash, you waste hours running around town and standing in line. And you run the risk of losing large sums or meeting a thief. Be smart - open a Special Checking Account at CHASE, and pay your bills by main. A check is permanent proof of payment. You can start your CHASE account today. No minimum balance required. No deposit changes. --- My notes: 1. New - Everyone at the time was paying bills by "running around town" and using cash, which poses a risk of them being robbed or losing money while commuting. If they open a CHASE account, they'll be able to pay their bills by mail. 2. Easy - Wasting time just to pay your bills is a hassle. Instead, opening a CHASE account gives them a stress-free way of paying bills. 3. Safe - By paying bills through mail, the check becomes their "permanent proof of payment". No risk of your electricity going down out of nowhere. 4. Big - Instead of paying their bills in 60+ minutes, they can do it in less than 5. That's plenty of time saved over the years. 5. Unique - People have been paying their bills the same way for years: Dress up, go to the offices, wait in line at each one, pay, go back home. With the help of CHASE, all of this friction is removed. 6. Useful - CHASE helps you save time, effort and eliminates the risk of you getting robbed, or your electricity/water going down in the middle of the day. --- Feel free to rate my work, tell me where I could improve and maybe even get an idea of what a copy translation might look like if you're feeling stuck. Hope this helps!
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My 1st Copy Translation
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1 upwork proposal and loom video sent Client work for much of the morning. Started 'translating' the sales page for the upcoming Female Buyer Psychology Workshop Heres what I have so far: stop selling to women like they're men NEW - different way to sell UNIQUE - ‘selling to women’ is not a common angle for copywriting gurus and courses USEFUL - half the population are women, this can help get more sales Men buy linearly. Women buy circularly. UNIQUE way to look at selling/buying EASY to understand how different the approaches need to be -Women vs Men, even if the reader doesn't understand specifically what is mean by ‘linearly’ and ‘circularly’ its EASY to see they are very different If you're still using "pain, agitation, and twist the knife" on female buyers, you're making them feel manipulated, talked down to, and unseen. And when you make women feel like sh*t, they will NEVER do business with you. BIG - hard hitting statement, half your potential customers may NEVER do business with you USEFUL - learn something better, more effective than PAS The Real Problem Your Product Is Good. Your Copy Is Repelling Her. USEFUL - here is whats really affecting your ability to sell to women HOPE - your'e not a bad copywriter/marketer and the business isnt broken its just the approach is wrong
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That's a good way to look at things. The "linear vs circular" way just means that for men, you need to feel their pain just enough and present a compelling logic that would convince them to buy. For women, it means that you have to validate her emotions throughout the entire sales funnel, be it email sign-up, landing page, sales page...any and everything to make her feel like she belongs there and that what you're offering is exactly what she needs. You nailed the PAS down-talk. You can't hurt her feelings and expect her to buy. Even a single sentence may force her to swipe up or close the tab. Great work, keep going strong!
Lina: “My edge over other copywriters...”
@Lina Fahizul is a copywriter in high demand. She's booked out with clients and has a bunch of brands on a waitlist. And she gets huge wins for her clients. Her CRO split tests are beating controls by 100% and 200%. I asked her what her edge is. Here's what she told me. *** My edge is that I don't guess. I diagnose. Most copywriters write what they think sounds good, follow the frameworks, study the swipe files, and run “proven direct response copy” on a female audience. When it underperforms, they just keep testing new headlines and new hooks with no real hypothesis behind any of it. Then they decide women are harder to convert. They're not. You just don't understand how they buy. I've spent years reverse-engineering female buyer psychology. I've audited over 200 funnels and interviewed real women about what made them pull out their credit card and what made them leave. What I found dismantled almost everything I thought I knew about direct response. Women don't buy linearly. They buy circularly. They need multiple touchpoints, multiple passes, multiple moments of validation before they commit. Most funnels are built for one visit and one conversion. And that's exactly why they fail with women. I also know that there are six emotional blockers that have to open before a woman will buy: recognition, validation, permission, proof, safety, and belonging. Once I know that, I look at the data to form my hypothesis. Where on the page do I need to address each one, and how? What makes me different is that I live in the space between emotional empathy and hard data. A lot of marketers go purely on vibes. Others lean too hard on data and lose the emotional thread entirely. I do both. I know how women buy, and I know how to validate that with what the numbers are actually telling me. *** Lina will host a live, 3-day workshop on female buyer psychology starting tomorrow. The workshop will run from July 1st to 3rd.
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So the TL:DR from what I understand is this: You have to reassure a woman so much, that she can't help but buy. If you don't validate her feelings well enough, she won't feel accepted and welcomed, leading her to swipe up or close the page. Lina seems like one of those people who genuinely know what they're talking about. Instead of sticking to the "gold standard", she's going out of her way to get as much information about the target audience as she can, instead of sticking to the norm. Glad to see that she now hosting this event!
From confused and overthinking to taking action with confidence
Joining copywriting Launchpad has been one of the best decision I’ve made.. Before joining, I was constantly overthinking, consuming content, and unsure what steps to take next.. What makes it different isn’t just the copywriting education- it’s the environment, the mindset, and the people. This community gave me a complete new perspective on business, personal growth and what it actuall takes to succeed. The courses inside this community are just unreal, they provide value, you won’t find anywhere on the Internet. Thank you sir nabeel for your guidance and support, the biggest transformation wasn’t just in my skills- it was in the way I think for that alone I’m Incredibly grateful for everything I’ve learned inside
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Congratulations Sahil, glad it's going good for ya! You know, I've experienced something similar. Wanted to start copywriting but never really did, because I had no idea what to do. The copywriting launchpad is THE community for ambitious people of all ages who want to learn how to write high-quality copy. Excited to hear that you even got two clients now. That's outstanding. Keep grinding!
Hook for sales and landing page.
Do we add hook in sales and landing page? if yes, the what kind of hook is added?
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The headline is the hook most of the time. After all, it's one of the first things the reader sees when they open the sales/landing page. There's also a difference between a boring hook and a good hook. Here's an example of that: Boring Hook: Lose 5 KG in 3 Weeks! Polished Hook: Over 1,000 Busy Housewives Have Lost 5 KG in Just 3 Weeks By Following This Plan Hope this helps!
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Georgi Staykov
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