@Paulo Costa, The Roaster Thank you. I knew that. And I forgt.

The numbers say it all. People are interested in this. Thanks for clarifying the idea for me. @Chris K. Davidson

What you have is easy on the eye. Gets the headline, the main idea, out in a glance--people immediately know if they are in your niche and if it is something they would like to know more about, maybe join. It doesn't get any better than that. If you were to add your picture, it would be too crowded without taking something away, like the weightlifter, and taking something away would be a loss. I'm not surprised you got a high ranking with this. It's not broken. It doesn't need fixing. And who cares if 90% do About pages differently from you?

I don't know what PPP means. But if it's jargon that your audience understands, you can disregard this, of course. It seems you are trying to give an abbreviated, condensed version of many points. I wonder if all the points you're trying to make are essential for people in the lobby of the building. Maybe some can wait until they are on the second floor? I haven't a clue. I'm pretty sure the poll could be reformated into a "normal" presentation. Maybe inviting them to ask themselves which describes them, or asking them "which are you? Or are you both?" This might take up less real estate, and I like that. But more importantly, it might make the space a little less cluttered, a little more streamlined and thus easier on the eye. (I feel an about page should be like opening one drawer in a chest. Yes, there may be a numer of things in the top drawer. But it seems you might be opening more drawers--or having a poll/survey format might have the feel to it simply because it is another creature.

The time in the video is PDT (West coast time). If you use the button to add this to your calendar, it will show up with the correct time on your calendar. (For me, 12:00 noon). I'll try to be there.

I loved your video and when it ended, I was thinking I would sign up. I'm not in your niche. And I guess what I heard was basically you know how to make it easy. So I wasn't worried about your audience. I wanted it from the first moment. And that desire was my filter, making me focus on "Yes, you are good, you know what you're doing, you've developed something amazing over 4 years." I read Paulo's feedback. He is spot on when he says, "It might be good to niche down to just Spanish" (and if you want to have other languages in your back pocket for people who ask for them, maybe you can do that on the side without making it a distraction from Spanish--but maybe it would have to be not part of Skool, just on your own). And I agree that in your case there is no need for any further niching. It isn't exactly logical. Even the lawyers would wonder why you're doing it. Setting them apart. The problem with making lawyers or bakers a special targetted group is that it isn't natural. It isn't naturally justifiable. For language learning. It's irrelevant. It doesn't enter the field, it doesn't land on the radar as a consideration. Kind of like something about pet health would never be niched to "for professionals" or for anyone. It is for those who own pets. Anyone who owns pet. Ditto for this. It is for those who want to learn Spanish. For whatever reason. Travelling soon. In my case the reason is because it will help my mind (and body?) remain vibrant. And it will be rich experience.