I fear this will be easy https://www.skool.com/monetize-your-art-2452/about?ref=7c2be97bf54a4007bb543a5ea3f3930d

Hi everyone! I would much appreciate it if you could roast my page... I am still working on it, but before I make any changes, I want to learn what I should change. Also, there's no VSL yet, will do one tomorrow. Also, if it helps, I think my question is if my about page has a clear message - who my community is it for, and how I help them (I help coaches overcome their mindset blocks that are holding them back from building their business - blocks like the impostor syndrome, visibility or failure fears, getting excited to start and build the business and then running away, etc.) Here's the link to my about page: https://www.skool.com/thegrowthnetwork/about Thank you all for your help!🙌

Describe in one sentence what is the pain point that you solve for your client. Example: - You want to take control of your finances - You want to speak more clearly - You want to get international opportunities Post a link at the end of it if you'd like.