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6d •
Reviews All Around!
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1E6jFkirO8_vRWDZArAEnI3357-BLrOQGyRPHW5LqIqI/edit?usp=sharing Drop yours and I'll review it too.
0 likes • 1d
@Trung Tính Hà not bad, you've got potential. i gave you some stuff to work on. Write more, make sure your writing for a real company so you can master the research aspect and don't be afraid of longer lines just learn how to pace. i gave you a lot but just focus on what makes sense
0 likes • 1d
@Sowjanya M focus on simplicity
22d •
I'm free today!! Drop your copy for review
I'd be honest as possible in my feedback. And note; no hard feeling. We'll just want to get better as writers, okay? Let's go🔥
0 likes • 14d
@Daniel Dolan you have to allow access, go to share change from restricted and press commenter
1 like • 14d
@Muhammad Saud gave you some stuff to focus on at the bottom definetly focus on structure, try PAS, CJN or DIC and if you write for a real company i think most of the problems will solve itself
19d •
Review for Review
https://docs.google.com/document/d/155IAQbitQOHshWomkSj9w8WM2Cd1oGGRZ35LRSQ41GU/edit?usp=sharing
Jul 13 •
EMAIL REVIEW EVEREYYBODDYY
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1I7uCip4vYrqwdQaSkG66cCv_ZC1HcRfggDO7URmW4co/edit?usp=drivesdk
0 likes • Jul 13
i think your structure is good, just need more intruige less fluff, UMs, more substance. 5.5/10
Jul 12 •
The Fam Just Got One Member Stronger!!!
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1eCMgaMUDOVerFRsmN58UZgaI2-zq2JnecJR0zoKt9a0/edit?usp=sharing. if anyone wanna help me to get better at writng , this is a chance . i appreciate it a lot . tnks in advance
0 likes • Jul 13
idk if you wrote for a real person or not, or what the point of the email is or why id even click on the link, lots of work to do my friend, definetly start with structure next time
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