@Haze Christ did you review mine

@Shiva Ram Xyz good thing you got going there but it could be way way better if you improve on it with the help of chatgpt. Right now for me..... I'll rate it 3.5. No hard feelings. Left some comments Each line should build up for the next one and the CTA was poor

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@Shiva Ram Xyz left some comments already. Story email ain't bad but you need to make it better. You're claiming readership right now. Don't forget that there's tiktok taking people's attention. So you need to make your story interesting so they read to the end without leaving So utilise chatgpt. Tell it to make every line flow Each line should build momentum for the next It should be more interesting to keep the reader glue And CTA shouldn't feel like CTA but a subtle change or transition. I hope this helps

@Enoch Adebisi you're welcome anytime brother