This vs. That: Which is Better?
One thing I've had BRANDED into my BRAIN for a while now is our human nature to compare ourselves to what everyone else is doing. But that's not what this post is about. This post is about a copywriting trick I learned from Dakota Robertson, a close mentor of mine who has been building personal brands for people on X (Twitter) the past few years. The goal of copywriting is to be as clear and concise as humanly possible. In the game of copy on social media, you only have TWO SECONDS to capture someone's attention over the phone. Because social media moves faster than our lives ever could. So with this said, if you believe in the 80/20 rule, then I'd like to ask you to see "that" more often than not, you don't need to use the word "that" in your copy. Because 80% of the time, you can use other words "WHICH" (not 'that') are simply more IMPACTFUL to your reader. Every word counts in the game of attention we play when we decide to step into the online world. And it's not only about CAPTURING attention, it's also about RETAINING attention. If you reread the second line of this post you'll notice there are absolutely exceptions to this rule. But it's all about the context of which you use the word which matters most. For example: In the second line, I used the word "that" purposefully, but only because I was COMPARING it to "this" instead. Make sense? I also used the word "that" in the next line only to prove a point. My brain (and likely yours too) is wired for simplicity. And simplicity sells! However, using the word "that" too frequently -- especially in your copy -- is not the most impactful option when it comes to selling goods and services. 8 times out of 10, the word "that" is just a filler which does not hold ANY significance to the point you want to make to your reader. One of my favorite exceptions to this rule is whenever you are comparing two things in the same sentence: "I don't like [that], because i like [this] more" "I don't do [this], because i prefer [that]