Crafting my Pitch. a book in a paragraph
OPEN TO FEEDBACK... 👉 What are you learning from the process? 👉 What can I improve on my pitch? 👉 Is one stronger/more intriguing than the other? Lost on Purpose A When a 24-year-old teacher boards a one-way flight to China with no phone, no map, and no plan home, she wants to disappear into a life so foreign it erases the one she's failing to live, because she doesn't yet know who she is underneath the roles she's been performing — daughter, teacher, girlfriend, good girl — but she must first survive being stripped of every language, custom, and certainty she's ever relied on — collapsing into a depression so total it lands her in a hospital bed in a country where she can't even ask for help — before she can fall in love (with a man she can't keep, a culture she can't fully enter, and finally, haltingly, herself) and walk back into her own life finally able to say what she actually feels. B When a newly arrived American teacher gets dropped into rural China with nothing but a Lonely Planet and her own naivety, she tries to simply survive the year, because she signed up for an adventure without understanding what "foreign" actually meant, but she must first stumble through weddings, hospitals, night markets, and a hundred small humiliations that strip away her assumptions about herself, before she can realize that getting completely lost was the only way she was ever going to find out who she is.