Woah! Great attempt Becca..This is solid

I'm on it!

Okay I actually really like this, you’ve got it right Stevie🙌 the fact that you’re focusing on speaking to strangers with your Reels is exactly what’s gonna grow your page. And then using Posts to build trust and Stories to keep things personal? That’s the perfect flow. Also love that you’re not just chasing trends for the sake of it , that’s where most people go wrong. Only thing I’d say is just make sure your content actually feels like this when you post, especially with Reels..keep it relatable and not too “teacher mode.” But overall, you’re definitely on the right track with this!!! 🥰

Great attempt Stevie! this is a solid reel overall 👏 it clearly falls under educational/value content and your hook is actually on point, the “feet pics” angle is scroll-stopping and works really well. Where it dips slightly (and you already noticed this) is when you transition into full teaching mode. One thing to keep in mind is that educational content should never feel like you’re teaching a class, it should feel like you’re venting or sharing something with a friend... that’s what keeps people hooked. Your Step 3 rewrite starts strong and relatable, but when you move into “once I started doing these 3 moves…” it becomes a bit structured again, so instead try flipping that into curiosity like “so I was like… okay what now? how do I actually fix this? I’ll tell you!” to keep it casual and engaging. Also for the outro, this is a big opportunity since you started with feet pics, create a loop effect by ending with it too, something like “I don’t know about feet pics… but THIS is what actually runs your entire lower body,” so it feels like a full circle and encourages rewatches. Overall you’re very close with this one, it just needs that shift in tone and a stronger loop to really hit.

Hey Becca! It's a good try! I want your to attempt it again today and post the story link in the community. So we can support you!