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The Five Habits of Elite Editors
During my years writing and editing for The Wall Street Journal, The Economist, and Bloomberg News, I tried to understand what the best editors I worked with were doing. Five habits of mind emerged from observing them and practicing the craft myself. They underpin what I teach in A Crash Course in Writing Well. Each habit begins with an aspiration. You may hear echoes of the following five aspirations in some of your favorite essays, speeches, op-eds, and nonfiction. 1. Comprehensible They strive to make the writing easy to understand. This means removing unnecessary complexity and making sure readers can follow the reasoning without having to work too hard. Simplicity and clarity are essential here. 2. Authentic They strive to make the writing sound honest. They remove jargon, pretentious language, and artificial posturing while preserving the writer’s personality and distinctive way of expressing ideas. 3. Beautiful They strive to make the writing flow well. They smooth out the rhythm and improve structure. This is the quality I call elegance. 4. Engaging They strive to make the writing hold attention and evoke a response. They use colorful details, vivid language, and well-chosen examples to help readers feel the significance of what they are reading. This is where evocativeness matters. 5. Effective They strive to make the writing achieve the purpose for which it was written. Whether the aim is to inform, persuade, teach, or inspire, every passage should contribute. Even a beautiful sentence may need to go if it distracts from that purpose. Through practice, these five aspirations — comprehensibility, authenticity, beauty, engagement, and effectiveness — become editorial habits. They are the gold standard I absorbed from exceptional editors who were unwilling to stop at prose that was merely serviceable.
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The classifications Shani teaches have become a natural part of my writing process. Although I sometimes struggle with a blank page, once I identify a topic and an audience, I begin brainstorming. I let my thoughts fill the page without filtering them, then separate them into individual sentences or phrases. Next, I label these segments and group those with similar labels. If the content follows a timeline, I arrange it chronologically and use subcategories to organize the details. As the prose develops, I consider whether each idea is relevant to my audience, unnecessary, or repetitive. I then read the draft aloud, looking and listening for errors, repetition, and opportunities to apply Shani’s writing and editing methods. This process has helped me communicate my thoughts more clearly in messages, emails, and reports.
Nov '24 • 
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Basic Writing Knowledge Test
You need to have watched some of my courses to be able to answer the following three questions accurately: 1. What are the four ingredients of good writing?(From Secret Sauce of Great Writing, Writing With Flair, and A Crash Course in Writing Well) 2. What are the four levels of writing mastery? (From Ninja Writing) 3. What are the four dimensions of exquisite prose? (From Editing Mastery) As always, don't look at other people's answers until you've had a go yourself :)
8 likes • Nov '24
1. The four ingredients are: Simplicity, Clarity, Elegance, and Evocativeness. 2. The four levels are: Narrative, Paragraph, Sentence, and Word. 3. The four dimensions are: Content, Structure, Style, and Presentation.
Literary Gem
“At night in this waterless air the stars come down just out of reach of your fingers." John Steinbeck wrote this vision of the southwest desert in 'Travels with Charley'.
Ahead of Our Live Call... Think About Your Goals
Really looking forward to meeting those of you who can make it on Sunday! Ahead of the call, it would be great if you could aim to solidify in your minds your long-term writing goals and any specific challenges you face -- so that you're better equipped to ask related questions, if you have any. A reminder, too, that you can access the Zoom link by logging into the academy and then clicking on the banner near the top of the Community page that says "#1 Live Group Call." Alternatively, you can get to the link via the Calendar page. See you soon, folks :) Shani
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Happy Birthday, Shani!
Ready For Our First Live Community Call? Let Me Know Your Preferred Times
I don't know about you, but I'm really excited about getting to know you better. 😀 That's why I'd like to invite you to join the Elite Writing Academy's first live community call! 🎆 Finally, you'll get to meet-and-greet each other, ask me your smouldering questions, and learn how best to use the academy to accelerate your growth. I'll also be announcing a special prize for one lucky person who's been a huge asset to the community in its early days. 😀 It may be challenging to find a convenient day/time, as our members are presently scattered far and wide across the globe. 🌎 It's unlikely we'll be able to accommodate everyone's wishes (sorry), but it will help in scheduling the call to at least know your preferences. I'm aiming for an hourlong event sometime in the first week of October if that works out. What day/time works best for you? 👇
3 likes • Sep '24
I suggest October 24th, from 6pm—7pm PT.
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Alyce Hoggan
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I am a researcher and designer investigating the intersection of data visualization, artificial intelligence, and robotics.

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Joined Oct 17, 2026
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