@Paulo Costa, The Roaster Ultimately, I suspect I'm being arbitrary here... AKA I reckon either "POST YOUR WORK" or "POST WHAT YOU BUILT" gets the job done. ✌️😉💯 AKA it's less a case of the precise wording being a problem and more of a case of where + which wording makes sense with the promotional process that you build around this. 🤗💯 I like how you placed this at the bottom and I believe the wording of the white is a little different- but that may be my faulty memory:

@Paulo Costa, The Roaster (Ah, I mean at the bottom of "POST WHAT YOU BUILT"- AKA I like how you moved that there from the first version. ✌️👀💯)

@Paulo Costa, The Roaster Me instantly: "What is a Gen X?" 👀👀👀 Goes and Googles it, lol: "Ah! 1965-1980... I'm excluded." ✌️😆💯 I like how smooth and flowing it is! 👀 The people who join will need to already have an idea about what a Gen X is and what UGC is... 🤔 I remember that a few months ago- I didn't know what UGC is, but since I know it's about making money from brands by posting one's user experience of using the brand's products... I'm quite intrigued. 👀 MAYBE YOU COULD CONVEY THIS HIGHER UP OR EVEN IN THE TITLE MORE: "We're kicking off October with our Haunted House Challenge—a fun way to take action, create proof and quit letting perfection scare you away. 👻" AKA the fact that this is a challenge, so you/ the reader doesn't want to be late to the start of the challenge!! ✌️😉💯 OOH! THIS IS SO GOOD: "Our Founding 25 spots are officially filled, and we're already growing toward 50!" I love it loads though the way that it is right now- I'm just shared my reactions, impressions, perspective about it as data for you to see how I've reacted to it. ✌️😎💯 AKA goodluck with your market researching and split testing for the kinds of reactions you want from the readers of the promo! 🤗💯

@Paulo Costa, The Roaster @Rasheed Hooda WOW!!!! THIS IS ONE OF THE BEST ABOUT PAGES I'VE EVER READ!!! 😍😍😍 About Pages aren't one-size-fits-all. AKA there isn't some perfect About Page template that everyone needs to use and when they do THEN their About Page is perfect. I see lots of other people (as well as myself) tend to want to stuff everything onto the About Page, instead of the About Page being written with ONE single purpose in mind. AKA the About Page here is clearly written to grab my attention and keep me reading- spark my interest + kill my disinterest. It totally does the job. 💯 I love how it creates the attitude in my mind of: "I DON'T NEED TO OVERTHINK THIS. IT'S NOT A BIG DEAL TO JOIN AND ACTUALLY THIS IS THE RIGHT SPACE FOR ME, SO I DO JOIN- BECAUSE I MIGHT DISCOVER A MAGICAL SPACE/ A HIDDEN TREASURE FOR ME." #5 is like: You have to pay five dollars. Response in my mind = "Yeah? Well, that's not big." #4 response = "Well, work never scared me, but being able to be precise and move forward in an optimized way that saves time, energy, and brain space is something that's harder to figure out." #3 response = "Like using what I'm passionate about to profit." #2 response = "So the people in this group GET IT, instead of discouraging me." #1 response = "So this is profitable"... "Ah, I wanted it to be guaranteed- but that makes sense now, since life is like that." "Yeah, I'm still here and this whole About Page has been nurturing the feeling of things not being a big deal- just shoot forward through life the way you want to and this group will help with that, SO WHY NOT JOIN?" I wish there was a little bit more enticement telling what the gift is like, but I suppose it's a MYSTERY GIFT. ✌️😆💯 I love the vibe setting with the "Welcome Home, Weirdo." The snippet does feel a little off for me- I'm probably so against it, since I'm not over 40, lol. (AKA I've been excluded): 🤣🤣🤣 "For men and women 40+ This is better than FIRE. Build a bridge income to be able to breathe, so you can dream again and figure out how to pay for it."

@Chris K. Davidson @Paulo Costa, The Roaster In my household... AI is the standard of stupid. 😶💦 I'm not being aggressive when I say this- I'm stating a very neutral fact that it seems like a lot of people who push for AI don't realize. ✌️😉💯 It started with the chatbots, back in the day... If you didn't know something- then you looked it up. 💯 If you didn't know something and the "not knowing" went beyond being able to help yourself- then you definitely needed live support. 💯 Live HUMAN Chat was the GOLDEN standard of support. ✌️😌✨ Chatbots was the standard of a business that you didn't want to associate with... because the chatbots couldn't replace live support and you were "dumb and lazy" if you used the chatbots to ask questions about things that were so trivial that you could easily look them up yourself. 🤔 So, then AI comes out and chatbots already have the enigma of being poor quality, used by stupid people, for stupid level responses... The mindset remains the same as with chatbots: IF I USE AI THEN THIS MEANS I AM STUPID. AI IS THE STANDARD OF STUPID. But AI starts getting flooded everywhere- it's on the internet browsers now as the first option. AND IT TENDS TO BE HIGHLY INACCURATE WHEN IT COMES TO INFORMATION. 😶 My sissies looked themselves up online and the AI was saying a whole bunch of inaccurate things about my sissies' books AS FACT. 👀👀👀 You see loads of people complaining about how it takes longer to fact-check and correct the AI, then to research for accurate information by oneself... I believe that AI is the standard of stupid, but at the same time I'm open to the idea of it, because I love calculators. AKA AI IS A TOOL AND IF THERE IS A WAY TO USE IT, LIKE HOW CALCULATORS HELP WITH MATH, THEN BY ALL MEANS! THAT'S GREAT. Just- what I've seen of it is that AI is inaccurate and annoying. So, I read this: "You're not replacing your art. You're eliminating the logistical nightmares of your craft."

@Paulo Costa, The Roaster @Karin Crawford Karin... what do you want from this About Page? 🤔 I mean- what state do you want the reader to be in? What do you want them to feel? What do you want them to be thinking? And is your goal for this About Page to be a product description? A sales post? A vibe post? An advertisement? Right now, I feel as though this About Page version has a lot put into it- AKA it's loaded... and at the start it's talking about vibes and the ultimate goal of people and then we go into the fact that they have a video library and can use their videos in the group... 🤔 AKA I feel as though we're throwing all of the spaghetti at the wall and hoping one part will leave a deep impression that causes the reader of the About Page to buy... 🤔 But instead of pouring everything in- we can choose ONE purpose for the About Page, AKA one way we want people to 1. THINK, 2. FEEL, 3. DO from having read it... You don't need to "catch" the reader- cause them to buy... We need the reader to take ONE step THAT GETS THEM ON THE ROAD TOWARDS BUYING. AKA you don't need to instantly sell them the castle, the moat, the village, and the land. You can pass them the deed first, and then they read it, and then they ask questions, and then they do more and more SMALL STEPS- ONE STEP AT A TIME... until they are ready to sign the contract to purchase. So, the first question I'm asking myself as I'm reading this here is how you intend to use this About Page and then I'm asking myself what VERY FIRST STEP you want the buyer to naturally progress on... We can only be satisfied with this About Page once it is doing the job that it is intended to do- SO WE NEED TO DEFINE WHAT THE JOB OF THE ABOUT PAGE IS. And the job of the About Page isn't: FOR PEOPLE TO JOIN THE GROUP. That's already a given- that's the big, vast, vague, broad and ineffective goal that matches up with throwing all of the spaghetti at the wall and hoping some will stick.