@Ann Shi Good, well said. 😊 CEO, the E should be a little more clear. "...to be part of A famous family... (need the article A) YOU need to deal with complex relationships.": (add You and relationship needs to be plural since family is a group )

@Difa Love Good. Stronger N sound (connections) "If you want to do anything to SUCCEED..." (not success) Try saying your last sentence this way: "...so nothing will happen if you don't do it"

@Simom Chen Great! I told him (use past tense) he could play A video game (needs an article)😊

@Leah Yip good. 😊 Stronger D (could)