Make it burnn Edit: I did a simpler second version

I’m on page 6 of school in music and decided to look at other music groups on the first five pages. Mine looks like a child made it. Can you help I want to be on the first page of school in music category and I need to be roasted! 🍠 🔥 https://www.skool.com/the-singing-circle

What is a roast? Roasting is giving brutally honest opinions about someone or something. For the brutal part, we do have to establish some limits, as we can't be offensive or unhelpful. You can point out the flaws of other people's work but not insult the person behind it. I think that's a good line to establish. Give genuinely helpful advice, pointing out the flaws and giving an alternative for improvement. Make it fun! We all need to see the flaws in our ways to progress. Rules: - Only post roast requests. Go to the playground pined post for other kinds of comments. - Submit up to one type of roast a day - Don't spam. - Don't do CTAs or self promote unless you are Premium or VIP. - Even Premium or VIP need to do a roast before they promote themselves. Point out the problems in a detailed way and at the end sell yourself as a solution for them. Not just a "contact me here so I can talk about your website" kind of post, those will be deleted. Types of roast you can submit: - Roast my site home page: Any kind of website you have, but preferably landing pages. If you post unsafe or fradulent links, you will be banned. - Roast my skool about page: Post a link to your skool's about page or screenshots and text of it, if you dont want to hurt your convertion rate - Roast my Profile: Social media profiles, profesional profiles, freelance profiles. - Roast my Content: Text content, images and designs or short videos. Get evaluated on the marketing value of a post - Roast my business Ideas: business ideas, community ideas, app ideas and etc . - Roast my pitch/ad: post your sales pitch, be it as an add, bannner, text or video content. - Roast my lesson: get evaluated on the teaching method and the educational value of your post, not the marketing one. What will you get here? We have free memberships and paid ones. Click here to upgrade! 👉 Free members - Post your website, community, content, business idea or professional profile to be roasted. - Compete weekly to be the best roaster and have their page at the top of the community for a whole week. - Participate in live events

Premium members can do CTAs to sell themselves as solutions to the problems they point while roasting. They will also have me tagging them at posts that they can answer according to their expertize. So in that way you get notified when there is a good opportunity for you to roast someone and convince them to follow you, make a call with you or even hire a service you offer. If you're premium, are you ok with me tagging you?

Wow it only took 3 days! For those who just joined, you can check the pined posts for full details. But here is a short recap of what's inside. 👉 Free members - Post your website, community, content, business idea or professional profile to be roasted. - Compete weekly to be the best roaster and have your page at the top of the community for a whole week. - Participate in live events 👉 Premium members (Free for the first 50 who joined, 2 USD for new members) - Promote yourself after giving a roast. So you can provide your services as a solution to the problems they point out. How neat is that? You can get clients by engaging on comments instead of hustling to create content and waiting to be noticed - You will also be tagged by me to posts relevant posts for you to roast, if you agree on that. - You will have access to live recording and exclusive future content. 👉 VIP (19 USD) - You will have your portfolio inside my classroom - You can host lives mothly live events and in addition to that will have me promoting them inside and outside of Skool. - I'll do CTA's for your services in relevant roasts - So you don't even need to be active inside my community in order to get clients referred to you! If you want to upgrade click here