Beyond Should and Want
Hey folks,
This is the latest essay in my ten-part series. In it, I talk about how we have things that we want to do and know we should do and those may be pointing us toward who we are underneath.
This is not my finest work, but I'm committed to never letting perfection become the enemy of progress.
SO!
Since this is the Wordsmiths' Guild, let's take a look at it.
At your earliest convenience, let me know what you think of a few things:
  • Pacing - is the pacing good? Too fast? Too slow?
  • Grammar - how are my sentence and paragraph structures? Are my punctuations doing their jobs?
  • Was it too didactic? Too relatable? Too abstract?
  • Whatever else you think of - bust out your red pen and mark it up!
Have fun!
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Shawn Helgerson
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