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I'm going to use one of these in a query letter.
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Days after her family inherits a cursed castle, her brother disappears and her parents are imprisoned. Now the surviving daughter must embrace a dynastic inheritance and face the vengeance of a thousand-year-old necromancer that seeks to destroy them.
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When a spoiled influencer's family inherits a legendary English castle, a billionaire abducts her brother for the bloodline magic that will wake the dragon beneath it — forcing her to trade her selfie stick for a sword to get him back.
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