Goodbye series: Hook + Script

Context: I came up with a goodbye series before moving to Spain (this includes places and people). On Sunday, I will leave Mazatlán, which is a place I don't love. I want to make a lot of different videos with this concept. The first one is Goodbye to Mazatlán; the other will be Goodbye to my friends, family, etc.

This is the Hook and Script I prepared.

Hook: "This is the last time I'm saying goodbye to this city. And I mean that in the best way"

Body: "Welcome to my series of saying goodbye to places and people before I move to Segovia, Spain. I spent half my gap year here because it's where my dad's from and where he works. This was never a place I wanted to spend my life. So I'm glad I'm leaving. But it's bittersweet — my parents are still here. So somehow, this place still has a piece of my heart. I'm not saying goodbye to them. One way or another, they'll always be close. I'm saying goodbye to the hard nights. Crying, wishing I was anywhere else. Praying something would change tomorrow. I knew it was temporary. But a place still holds the memories you made in it — and this time, I really hope it's the last time I have to.

CTA: "I'm so happy to close this chapter and open one that changes everything. Follow along if you want to see how it unfolds."

I was thinking of doing a vlog-style + voiceover with clips of me leaving and clips I already have from being here. What do you guys think?

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Goodbye series: Hook + Script