Most people failed to implement Emotions and alter egos (found and explained in take their money by kyle milligan).
Most failed to write original copies and because of that they read like very other Email.
Remember: Seen before = Dead Email (find original Emails to use for your own writting)
Most failed to make Good SLs:
Remember: your Email is worthless if the SL is indistinguishable(grammar) from all the other Emails in the clients Inbox.
To stand out: Read Take Their Money by Kyle Miligan, Read at least 5 Emails every day and deconstruct them to find the Emotions and alter egos and then find a way to implement them in your writting.
(Do these and I GUARENTEE you that you'll stand out from the rest!)
Submit your copies in the next thread that is going to be made after this goes up.
If you have any questions please ask them here :).
Have a great day!!!!!!