can anyone please review and rate this email copy from 1-10

this is my first copy after taking a break form copywriting after 1 year, before that I practiced writing copy for 2 years never got a client so I was like lets try something new and well I learned to improve my out reach so I am back, black and ready to attack like tyson always said please be honest and brutal destroy my ego: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1BnwCIjy0rJ-XEEjF69oJDHy4X906la_T8UtnQJoDv9g/edit?usp=sharing

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