Nov 13 (edited) • General discussion
Just Do It :)
What's wrong with the following sentences:
- This essay will discuss both sides and then I will give my position.
- In this answer I will present both sides of the argument and then a reasoned opinion will be given.
- This essay will present ideas about both sides and then a conclusion will be provided.
- This essay will touch on both sides of the question and then I will present my personal perspective.
The problem with the sentences is that they are rote and trite. Why bother telling the reader what you're planning to do? Why not JUST DO IT. In other words, state your ideas rather than advise 'what's coming up'. Your IELTS examiner doesn't like it either! Here's what's written under 'Band 5.0-5.5': The introduction is present but very predictable and formulaic; it does not fully address the task in an original way.
My advice? Do not write sentences like this as part of your Task 2 answer! Instead of the aforementioned examples, why not write like this:
- Although there are some difficulties with history, overall I view it as a positive force for humans.
- In my opinion, while a lot of information is often incorrect, I still consider the internet to be a valid source of information.
- In my opinion, sports are primarily a way to keep fit and healthy.
These examples tell the reader how you feel about the topic and make your answer seem less memorised and more engaging. 😎
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