Aug 19 • Dark Romance & Paranormal
Does my second draft make sense?
I’m maybe 75% through my second draft. The story is the same but the POV is very different. I finally managed to get someone to read it and they said it makes no sense without reading the original draft. Pretty disappointed.
Happy to take the feedback of course, but I’m wondering if it’s a universal opinion or whether it’s only the opinion of one person. Could somebody read the first ten pages for me and let me know if they understand the story?
Genre: gothic political romance
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Does my second draft make sense?
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