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2d • Show and Tell
Our First Critique 🧩🧩🧩🧩🧩🧩
asked for a critique of this painting she has done.
She submitted a photo and gave me permission to share this.
(I will never do this publicly without your permission.)
response:
1. MEDIUM: Acrylic on canvas with gold leaf and gold paint.
2. GOAL/MESSAGE: The goal is a calm and relaxing vibe.
3. PRIMARY SUBJECT: What do you want the viewer to notice first? Vases and the reflections
4. STAGE: I think it’s done
5. HER LIKES: She loves the colors.
6. HER UNSURES: She feels the flowers on the branches are off a bit.
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This is going to be the heart of this community. Learning and giving feedback.
I will post my input in the comments.
I encourage you to give feedback.
A COUPLE THOUGHTS for you.
- Say what you like ❤️ about the painting first.
- Say what you feel isn’t working but please also give the why.
- Keep in mind, a critique IS NOT about you liking or not liking the subject matter. This is about the way the intended message is put on the canvas or panel.
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Our First Critique 🧩🧩🧩🧩🧩🧩
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