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Request for feedback on follow up email
Hello, all, I would appreciate some feedback.
I serve as a writing coach at a wonderful writing retreat centre -- meeting with each participant for a 1-1 and then doing a wrap up session with all three on the penultimate retreat day. One of my goals this year is to increase the conversion rate, turning retreat guests into long-term clients. My motivation for this is both my own biz goal & a heartfelt desire for them to use their retreat as a launchpad into a writing life. I get really positive feedback from my retreat clients, but my conversion rate, to date, has only been about one in about ten. Here is an email I propose to send my retreat people -- please may I have some feedback?
Dear Fellow Scribes,
It was wonderful to share your Starcroft Sparkle last week and I hope you had a lovely weekend.
Treat yourselves gently as you transition back into Monday.
How can you create space for a little Starcroft magic?
How can you allow for a few minutes of writing?
The end of a break can be the beginning of a new life chapter.
Thinking of you.
Warmly,
Jo
PS - Would you like to schedule a 20 minute discovery call to discuss your next steps, and how Write in Ten or coaching might serve? Click on this form to reach out, and I will be in touch.
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Request for feedback on follow up email
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