Would love some feedback on my new offer. Spend quite a bit of time going back and forth with the quantum sage, along with going through the skool engine and this is what I've come up with.
My previous I help statement was:
I help women 40+ increase energy, burn body fat and balance hormones. No gyms, no diets.
The previous name was, MAP: Metabolism Accelerator Program
Breathing new life into our offer, and program this is what I've come up with so far:
🔹 Name: Sovereign Shape System™
Triple S for marketing purposes - shortened like MAP. I. believe this would align with the staple we teach in our program called SSS - Sunday Success System
🔹 Tagline: Energy, Hormones & Confidence — For Women Done with Diets, Drama & Dependence
🔹 Descriptor: A simple, proven framework that helps high-functioning women reclaim their energy, rebalance their hormones, and feel powerful in their bodies again — without cardio, calorie tracking, or chaos.
I help statement:
I help high-functioning women reclaim their energy, rebalance their hormones, and feel powerful in their body again — without fad diets, endless cardio, or depending on broken systems.
Thanks very much!