So ... after a long day of tweaking marketing slides i came to this as a final one i think its clean and it fully explains the deal to the type of person its aiming at.
Below you will see the two different types ive created thus far. These are brand offers for partnerships and sponsorships and less of a sale, although its made clear that sales are optional.
What do you think, and let me know if your ready to start your monetization journey below