here is a re-edit on @Pricilla Navarro first video. Notice the adjustments that were made! 1. pacing is everything 2. face and voice are absolutely needed for the greatest impact 3. USE TEXT NATIVE TO THE PLATFORMS 🚨

First nail video uploaded https://www.tiktok.com/t/ZTNhhPEkG/

Good moring sir, I've recently decided to start all over with a new niche. NAILS! & I'm super excited. I plan to film my first video today and I'm going the educational route with this first one and basically creating a tutorial. Below is my script and I'd appreciate it if you could help me in revising it. Thank you! "These will last how long?! *shows finished look of set* Having your nails done has kinda been the 'IT' thing lately. But what if I told you, you could have your nails done without the hassle of going to a salon or having damaged nails?! So, this is before application. *shows bare nails* First I'm starting with nail prep, this is literally the most important part of the whole process. Clipping my cuticles, clipping my nails and then buffing my nail as well as the tips. Then I'm going to go in with primer. After the primer dries, I'm going to put just a enough *ugh, accidently put way too much glue* wait that's way too much, this is probably the most difficult part of the process, finding just the right amount of glue to apply. Now, I'm carefully curing my nails for about 60 seconds. Then I'm going in with my favorite nude color 'Put it in Neutral' by OPI and topping it off with some cute designs. & here is the final look. I never have to go to a salon again. Come back later to see just how long these last me."

I have finalized a new video for this week! I was unsure if I should rotate the footage at the end for a landscape view because I shot the footage in 16x9. I uploaded an example.

How's it looking so far? Think I'm ready to post it on the brand new tik tok page I started. https://youtube.com/shorts/NfBISjd-rPo?feature=share