Some times i Write Short Stories as a hobby. i thought i would share this. · 𝙂𝙊𝙊𝙎𝙄𝙁𝙔 🍓🐛🦋🌈⭐️🩷

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Some times i Write Short Stories as a hobby. i thought i would share this.

There is a reference to something Called The Iron Council. Sorry about that. I'll try to give Context. The "IC" is an online community. Thriving with high value men. I wrote this story as a post within the "IC" but i've shared it on facebook and now Skool. Should be a fun read.

among my talents would you believe i could write a short fictional story?

Well i can! and DId! here it is!

this sparked a creative thought within my spirit. Let me get this 'Story' out of the realm of potential and release it into our time and space bound digital world.

So there's a guy...No a young man. maybe 19...20 no no just turned 21. Perfect. Well anyway. This cat had a Good heart. Naive mind and a dark side that attracted the Devil's twisted love. As hard as that is to accept. For a Christian man like me. Dont get discouraged. The "Devil's Love" is just another trick. To "Mess with" someone. That's what i mean by he was loved by the "Devil" Anyway back to our protagonist. Who one night was having a exceptionally Schizophrenic go at it. The type of night where rain's fallin like the tears pourin. Where Magic exists. Portals to other worlds are just beyond the back ally. And a little hobo shack? abandoned but dry. Feel's like God's perfect Love sent from above.

Anyway's Our kid....21 years old. Not quite a child. But far from a "Man" Find's himself enthralled in a delusional yet blissful thought. And notices a shine. Like a lamp of some kind. The closer he gets to it. The More his feeble yet yearning for "Something..." anything really. Just somethin that can be his alone. That's all our hero's heart truly desires. As he's just a boy in a man's world. Yearning for something "Real" And in his mind state. the nature of the illness as well as our human condition and need for purpose. He find's a dead rat that sqeezed and got stuck in a bottle of rum. But to him. In that moment. And in that time and space. I wasn't a dead rat. It was a fully alive and powerful Genie.

So i assume if you are in the IC. You have a basic understanding of what a Genie is. I hate to assume. But most of us are smarter than an average bear. Fact is kid thinks he's getting three wishes. What does he wish for? as you already know from my post. The young man wishes for Love, Time, And a Faithful woman. And falls to sleep dreaming 'Somehow' of not only her face but their future. You know Marriage kids picket fence. All the features of a fairy tale love story.

The thing is There's a huge gap between belief and reality. And when those concepts are at odds. Generally things get "Weird" if not "Bonkers" "Crazy" "Off the wall" and "Totally screwed up" And this kid. Nameless. Just some rando who made a wish on a dead rat. Believed in his big heart. This is the night his entire life changed. From now on Love would flow like a Spring. Time would be spent in the Joy of the Arms of his Faithful woman. And it would be excellent. Marvelous. A fairy tale. Little did he know. He

was gonna meet a woman.

This woman was not ordinary. When she was created she was given just a little extra "Care" and it caused her a philanthropic idea of love and devotion. Anyway she meets up with our guy. with an easy, natural you could almost say Magical instant connection. On a park bench downtown. He's lookin hot. She gives him some water. And they get to talkin. And he is overwhelmed with a sense that This is his destiny. And his intensity. Sure, Bold, like he knows something she doesnt. Is a seductive and interesting quality. That guys his age usually dont possess. So they say one "time" but they know it's gonna turn into Two "Times" and then two "times" turns into a few "times" And they end up fallin.

But the thing is. Young Niave and Delusional. Does NOT make you a protector nor provider. And this is the part of the story. That Gives a man the Blues. Cuz there's this other Cat. And my Cat i mean Predator and by Predator. I mean a big muscle bound guy. That looks for hearts to break. Anyway. The a deep you could say "Creep" or "Sin" or even one might call it "Evil" Get's trigged by a boy kissing a girl. From the Creeps perspective. Mind Rot with lies and a head full of hell. This is sport. This is the most satisfying of games. He get's to "Smash" Which in the context of our story. Has many different layers and double triple meanings.

Anyway. Our Kid. Has just professed and confessed his love and experience. And as you might imagine. She based her feelings upon something she felt was Strong. And steady. So when she finds out the reason for his boldness is that he's delusional. She's sorely disappointed. But for some reason the woman she "IS" lives to fix things like him. So you're saying there's a chance? Unfortunately the reality is. This story could have been beautiful. Sick guy with a big heart find's caring girl. But the thing is Dream's or rather Delusions of grandeur. They come with a price. You have to "Pay your dues" You might can think your next 40-50 years are going to be spent in heaven. But this is the Earth. Where Creeps linger. And hearts get "Crushed"

Anyway to make a long story short. The bad guy. A true seducer of women. Sinks his teeth into her pretty flesh. Unbeknownst to our poor young boy. His girl has been hooked on another man's You could say "Love" But we all know it's just "Sex" to a creep. And our kid? His schizophrenic mind "Somehow" Shows him exactly what's going on behind his back. Vivid details of the love of his life being bound and uhh how can you say exacerbated for breath by an evil yet beautiful man. Her crying out in pleasure pain. And he is devastated. But the thing is? How does he even know what's real?

The truth is he Doesn't he just catches a train and runs, runs far runs from love and time? it may heal his "First" but not "Last" Brokenness within a wish on a dead rat. And he still believes his wishes are going to come true. Because of our human condition to rationalize and how our Hearts "Want" to believe. So in time perhaps he'll find his faithful love. But me? I've been there and what it taught me. Is that a Dead Rat is not a Genie.

Sorry if this was lame guys i just felt like writing a story.

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