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Roast my Email
I am trying out sending cold emails with LinkedIn DMs. Here is one email I sent for a partnership. It was sent to the founder of an AI vibe coding platform. Hi Name, I’ve been following (the platform), and the speed of your AI-first build is impressive. We often see the same pattern with serious users: apps build fast but break once real users, payments, and data come in. That’s where we fit as a partner. At n0c0de, we take fast-built prototypes and make them production-stable and scalable. For platforms like (platform name), this usually means: fewer abandoned projects lower churn from broken deployments a clear handoff: AI builds fast → humans make it ready to scale I’ve put together a short Loom with real product samples showing this transition. Would you be open to taking a look? Best, Name n0c0de | Bubble Partner n0c0de.com What do you think of this copy? Any improvement that needs to be made on the messaging
Your Offer in ONE Sentence (Let’s Tighten It)
Most offers are too long or too vague. Drop your offer in one sentence below. Example format: “I help [who] go from [pain] to [result] without [thing they hate].” I’ll help you: Remove fluff Increase clarity Make it easier for Founders/Sales Leaders to “get it”
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Drop Your Latest LinkedIn Post , I’ll Rewrite the Hook
Drop your most recent LinkedIn post below. If it: Got likes but no leads Felt “fine” but didn’t spark conversations Didn’t sound as sharp as you wanted I’ll rewrite: The hook The opening angle The CTA (if needed) When you post, include: Target reader: Founder / Sales Leader Goal: comments, DMs, or calls Let’s sharpen it.
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