I’d love to hear your thoughts or feedback on this design. I’m also offering free funnel design work in Figma — including copy and branding. Happy to help!

Hey Freedom Freelancers 👋 I've just completed this Luxury spa funnel mockup for my portfolio and would love your honest feedback before I finalize it. 💡Goal for the mockup: -Showcase a high-end spa experience with lead capture -Tell a transformation story to connect emotionally with prospects -Include a strong offer, FAQs, and a visual gallery to boost conversions 📌 What I'd like to know: -Does the flow make sense from top to bottom? -Do the sections feels persuasive enough to book the signature treatment? -Any design tweaks you'd suggest? Thanks in advance - all constructive criticism are welcome, as this is my first ever mockup 😅 P.S. This design was inspired by an existing spa brand, but I recreated it in my own style for learning and portfolio purposes.

Hi, I build this challenge funnel for my client

Hey everyone, I've decided to enhance my design skills to serve my clients better. But before that, I decided to share some of my Previous works with everyone here so they can tell what else I need to improve.. Since, MY ICP is Supplement & Ecom D2C owners, I wanna know what else you guys would give as an critic if I presented you this type of Funnel as an DEMO. Thanks:) P.S.: Your opinion matters.

It take me about 2 days in total; it's like 7 hours straight split nto those days. I do get inspired from the Gusten demo funnel. And here's the final result. Give me your feedback, and thank you so much for taking your time reading this