Spa Funnel Mockup - Feedback Wanted

Hey Freedom Freelancers 👋

I've just completed this Luxury spa funnel mockup for my portfolio and would love your honest feedback before I finalize it.

💡Goal for the mockup:

-Showcase a high-end spa experience with lead capture

-Tell a transformation story to connect emotionally with prospects

-Include a strong offer, FAQs, and a visual gallery to boost conversions

📌 What I'd like to know:

-Does the flow make sense from top to bottom?

-Do the sections feels persuasive enough to book the signature treatment?

-Any design tweaks you'd suggest?

Thanks in advance - all constructive criticism are welcome, as this is my first ever mockup 😅

P.S. This design was inspired by an existing spa brand, but I recreated it in my own style for learning and portfolio purposes.

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