I've found a few anomalies in the 9th chapter of the fist work:
“Your family believes in you. That is not a statistical variable. It is a fact.ef=”
That and a little consistency. A picture the MC has on a desk changed from his deceased wife to his sister and nephew. Nothing that the edit run I'm doing won't fix. The big issue is the timeline of the story is not consistent. I'll need to calculate all the time and ensure that everything is captured and fixed before I look at beta readers.