Or which elements of each? And what can be improved? I've been progressively sharing the first few chapters of this story as a preview, and I'm about to start the same here for feedback and as an encouragement for others to do the same, but here are two versions of the cover art.
This edgy but clean comedic adaptation of "Cinderella" is meant as a Christian allegory about discernment. One idea with retellings like this one is to have:
*A non-religious version that can be used in public schools and can become an unexpressed magnet to draw a following for the sake of explicitly Christian output.
*Either a specifically Christian version for use in Sunday school, Christian school, and Christian homes, or...
*A supplemental lesson course, designed for use in those places, that explains the Christian application.
(By the way, this adaptation is not recommended for kids under age 10 because of the Fairy Oddfather's magical machine gun, which shoots magic instead of bullets, but which gives Cinderella quite a scare at first. She's afraid she's about to be shot to death, but the Fairy Oddfather is just going to use it to transform her ragged dress into a ball gown.)