“Please everyone tell me how I can improve my dance skills.”

Guysss can you tell me is this good enough after practising for 2 3 days?? Any tips for more improvement and making choreo seems funs will be appreciated 😭 And provide me tips for singing as well

This was for an audition last year but it’s one of my best covers rn!! So any feedback would be great!! And yes I know I should pick dance or vocal but I think this specific one wanted both 🙃 though I usually only submit one category!!

did an easy dance with some sining would love feedback!!

Hii! Last november i got the opportunity to sign into a kpop competition and dance alone as a Soloist for the first time! I had 2 weeks to prepare the choreo, i honestly think it turned out pretty decent with the time i had but I wanted to have more feedback from this community (i don't know which place i got on the competition, i just know i wasnt at top 3)