Feedback pleasee

I tried to improve with the suggestions I was given, I don't have singing lessons, I learned everything by myself so I know it's not at a professional level yet, but I've been learning in the best way I can with tutorials from YouTube, TikTok, and Instagram. I'm thinking of using this for the auditions, but I'll practice others, and I accept suggestions on what would sound best for my voice.

This time I danced the pre-chorus and chorus and I'm seriously considering using it for auditions but I'm still not sure if I should try others for auditions. I'm going to train more dances obviously but I wanted suggestions on what would suit me best. But I will train this until it is "perfect".