feedback for DM strategy · Authentically You

Ben Biedrawa

May 1 (edited) • 🎬 Behind the Scenes

feedback for DM strategy

Hey

@Elfina Luk

thank you so much for your advice in the call we had!

I started to write an ice breaker and offer DM and would love to get some feedback from you!

What do you think?

Ice Breaker message:

“Hey [Name], I’m working on a new tool for community spaces that’s still in early testing — thought of you immediately. Would you be open to taking a quick look and giving your thoughts?”

Follow Up message:

Hey [Name],

I’m building something new for online communities like yours — virtual spaces where members can meet, share, or run events in a more natural, relaxed way. Think: avatars, shared spaces, screen sharing, and fun little interactions — but without the pressure of always being on camera.

I’m not selling anything (yet) — right now I’m just inviting a few handpicked community leaders to try it out, give honest feedback, and help shape where it goes. Totally free, no strings attached.

If you're curious, I’d love to show you how it works in a quick call. And if you’d like to test it live, I’m happy to personally join your community event to help with setup, support, and make sure everything runs smoothly.

Would you be open to that?

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